National Poetry Month 2023, Week Four: Hannah Linden’s “My daughter says the ghosts were busy last night”

April 24, 2023

I first read Hannah Linden’s poetry in 2014, when we were both part of Jo Bell’s “52” group of writers–a number of us committing to write a poem each week for the entire year. We shared our work-in-progress in response to the prompts Jo supplied us with each week in a private Facebook group. Hannah’s writing stood out from the group and I was delighted when she announced last year that her first pamphlet, The Beautiful Open Sky, was coming out in the Fall. (A pamphlet is what the Brits call a small selection of poems; what we in the States might call a chapbook.) 

Hannah is from a working class background, as she puts it, born in a “cotton mill town slum” in northern England. Poetry “didn’t seem like something one of us could write or think of as ‘ours,’” she said in an interview. Later, she “started writing poems on paper bags,” while working the register at a supermarket. Her co-workers “told people to come to their till instead because ‘can’t you see the poet is writing!’” 

Some early encouragement from a teacher led her to enter some poems into a prize competition, which she won. She went to university–the first in her family to do so–but “felt in awe of all writers, out of my depth and that I was kidding myself to think I could be ‘one of them’.” She gave up writing poetry until she was in her early thirties, having moved from the North to Devon, where she took some poetry classes, but got discouraged by a teacher there, and didn’t read or write poetry for fourteen years while raising her children. A random meeting with Mike Sims of the Poetry Society led to her sharing poems with him and he encouraged her to write more. Then she joined Simon Williams’ Poem-a-Day forum and “52.”

In the interview, Hannah explained that in these poems she “was interested in the way ‘mother’ is both a role and a relationship.” The Beautiful Open Sky opens with a series of poems exploring the damage inflicted by a narcissistic mother. The voice in the poems shifts from the mother “saying what she thinks her children may be feeling and then she lets them start to speak for themselves whilst navigating the role of a single parent.” Finally, “as her children mature, the mother starts to relate to them more as independent people and, in the last poem, the adult daughter herself is speaking in the poem’s title as the mother comes to terms with letting go.”

As Hannah says in the interview, “the ‘beautiful open sky’ is a way of trying to see the world when a series of situations are weighing you down, oppressing or terrifying you.”





My daughter says the ghosts were busy last night





I’m getting old. I don’t hear the creaks 

even on the nights she wakes me, unable

to settle into the cooling house. It could be

owls, I say. They call across the valley, hunt

and flirt with each other. Maybe,  she says,

I hear more than one species these days.

Insects in the loft, perhaps. But I know she’s

thinking of the people who lived here before—

those we never met or the one we try to forget.

And of the loneliness of the nights

when she should be somewhere else.

It’s too safe for her here now, and today

she’s going out into the world again.

Soon I’ll be the one listening

to the roof expanding, contracting.





–Hannah Linden, from The Beautiful Open Sky

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One Response to “National Poetry Month 2023, Week Four: Hannah Linden’s “My daughter says the ghosts were busy last night””

  1. Hannah Linden Says:

    Thank you so much Scott! If anyone would like a signed copy of my pamphlet, you can send me a message via my Twitter account: https://twitter.com/hannahl1n


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